I confess to being an advocate of storytelling.
I also favor the anecdotal lede – with caution.
I once taught this to my Seton Hall students, tongue in cheek.
The story is about a Russian nuclear attack:
Mary Jones went to retrieve the morning paper and guess what?
A giant mushroom cloud hung over her neighborhood.
She wondered if it was going to rain.
You may have to overlook my warped sense of humor.
Our friend Denny Hatch is an ace copywriter.
He cautions us to use this technique with grace and style.
He certainly doesn’t want us to beat it into chopped liver.
“Your 1st 10 words are more important than the next 10,000,” he writes.
“All writers are in the business of selling.
“Your single objective is to sell the reader in going on to the next sentence, next paragraph, all the way to the end.”
This is true of every literary form – letter, article or advertisement.
“The place to start selling is the lede.
“What’s a lede?
“The introduction to a news article, the first sentence.
“The ‘lede’ is a deliberate misspelling of ‘lead.’
When printing was done with lead type, it prevented confusion.
The lede not only tells what the story is about.
It invites the reader to read further.
Denny believes many of us start by:
• Clearing our throats.
• Rolling up our sleeves.
• Rubbing our hands together.
By then our poor readers have already gone on to Page 2.
Create a lousy lede and chances are the reader will go no further.
In “Capitol Weekly,” Will Shuck wrote:
“I am sick to death of the anecdotal lede, that annoying habit of news writers to start a straightforward story by painting a quaint little picture.
“If the story is about a bill requiring pet owners to spay or neuter their dogs (just to pick an imaginary example), the anecdotal lead first tells us how much Janey Johnson loves Missy, her cocker spaniel.
“No doubt Janey and Missy are a lovely pair, but a lot of us have jobs and kids and commutes and precious little time to muse about Missy’s reproductive potential.”
My humble advice is to use the anecdotal lede when it makes sense.
Have an exceptionally good one to open your story.
Take a hint from that fabled novelist Snoopy.
He always opened with “It was a dark and stormy night …”
Mine might open with an early morning mushroom cloud.
Pick your own poison.
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